Editorial Edits for Chris Tep

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
-Yes, job market sucks, need to fight for your job
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
-Yes it does
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
-No, it is a drawing
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
-Yes, and funny
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
-No, it's a drawing
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
-No, it's a drawing
7. Is the writing clear?
-Yes