Editorial Edits for James Webb

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
-Yes, Favre should come back.
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
-Yes
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
-Yes
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
-Somewhat
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
-No, all one paragraph
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
-Not in paragraphs
7. Is the writing clear?
-Yes